Senryu is a form of Japanese poetry, very similar to haiku. That is, it’s a short poem, generally three lines, and it has few words. Haiku are generally about Nature, whereas senryu are more likely to be about people, or a persons thoughts about something.

So, today, I was driving to my mother’s house for a visit and I saw something that made me think about what I had seen. My thoughts joined together and after driving a few kilometres further, I pulled over and wrote down this little verse.

 

motorcyclist racing next to train line

raising dust

and raising questions

 

So there it is. It may not be much, but it tells about what I saw and thought about, on seeing the dust and the person on the motorbike. Any thoughts from others concerning this gratefully received!

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